The title got two mistakes. I'm sorry but at least correct it.

Poor virgins souls 😂😂😂

I would say training instead of cultivation, feel like he is gardening

Good reading, thanks for chap

Ginny would follow the line

it still feels weird, just say : give us a hand. nah?

hummmmm, love it! getting back to good stuff !

yep

sorry mate, from France

well well well, another Chinese one, thanks, the story could have been good but it's too much for me. Pig, Crouching tiger and dragon dung, I'm out of this.

you can find it on Spacebattles

This fan fic is good but at least tell where you can find the original fanfic or at least who is the original author, it's called stealing property. Just in case, the actual author us Coeus and you can find it on "Spacebattles forum."

there is also grammarly or linguee 😂 Chatgpt is the easiest, time and quality wise

What the fuck ! it's a harem!!! WHY??? No I'm joking, good stuff, clean writing and even if I'm not into smut or sex story, this one feel good because of an interesting and refreshing story.

Thanks for respecting the manga. I wish there were more people like you.I'm done with chinese megalomaniac.

I don't want to be harsh or whatever, the idea is interesting, how it's implemented is quite rushy. Some inconsistency but it's ok, I would say as an excuse, it's a fanfic. What broke my heart was grammar, spelling and tense. There are some online correctors that exist. You can try chatgpt to help you. Not being a jerk, just trying to give you some advice to get better.

adapted*

my bad, it's " as the father of itachi

he is Itachi's father