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Honestly, the concept is cool. Unique enough on its own that if utilized well the story would read better. there are many grammar and continuity mistakes. From the one name and one code name the main character is meant to go by turning into like 20 different things and everyone in the story just acts like it was normal. The writing style is very xianxia. The mistakes really took it down Author trying to be original but more dumb than anything else. The concept of the story is to be limitless yet the very reason why my doesn’t do smart things and efficient things is because “I don’t want to limit my horizons”. 203 chapters thinking it would develope into something more, I was disappointed but it occupied my time. Thanks for the effort
The hidden enemy is hard to predict. Obito can literally come and go freely. Not plot, op bs.
80 ish. Konoha is like 40-50 years old at this point I think, could be wrong.
Eight gates are something Tobirama came up with. Had a experiment thing go down and almost everyone died, shut the process down. tobirama died around the time frame so the art was passed along with a survivor. (Might duy). At least if I remember correctly, lots of fan fics out there.
Double dis?