Koko_Palibino
Romance-Fantasy writer.
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Hmm... The author has a potential in developing the story. I love how he tells what is going on with a scene however it is very crucial to edit the story or read it twice before posting so you can see if there are grammatical errors. The author always forgets punctuations (") after the character's conversation. Still, I enjoy reading it so far. I hope the author will keep on updating the story. [img=update][img=recommend]
Forgot the (") to her speech.
I like how the author narrates the story but can lessen mentioning Aiden's name. You can introduce him once and you can use 'He' moving forward. I'm sure the reader knows from there who's the character in the current scene.
Owkeeeyyy Elsaaa
How do they awakened?
sounds interesting...
Oh sheet [img=faceslap]
I would smash the face for him lol
Alright, witty 🥴