I am not writing to vindicate my MC, but to show his journey through this eyes, so everything you see is how he perceives it

thanks for the gift

thanks for coming to read this novel, but before you dive in, I would really love to point out some things. yes, there is a harem , consisting of three females, each with their own specific reason of being with Noah, so if harem is not your swing, then don't indulge. R18 scenes, though this is a slice of life that will try to have good character development, there will still be a lot of very explicit scenes, ranging from blood and gore to Sexual content, if this is also not your swing, then don't indulge. The MC, you should know that even though overpowered, he finds no joy in fighting, unless enraged, so don't expect a constant stream of fights from him, there will be fights non the less, enough to make it an action packed novel, but the MC is mostly going to be plotting and planning. for the rest of the novel, you can find it out for yourself, thank you

you are viewing this from a normal standpoint , forgetting that the MC is not mentally stable at all, as someone that seeks out acceptance , he finally found friends, of course he would protect them, I urge you to make some research on mental issues and how they impact the person

but I don't recall doing such, the issue is that some chapters have 1500 words

mistake sir, sorry

but I will fix that, thank you

nope, there are two female leads, but there is only one love interest , tbe other female lead is his twin sister

both abilities are still in the new one

sorry about all the mistakes, I was new when I began this book, and obviously overlooked certain things. 🤦🤦🤦.

my honest reply as tbe author would be to not indulge in this one, I really say myself that I didn't do my best, the other one is my best work, buy this one😔😔😔

no harem

Like I said before , the narration keeps changing form

the line was vague, what is they had an issue in town and the curfew was 6

I can see the work out into this chapter, but the author should not make certain errors, like the obvious switch in narration style. also, it gave a good image of the fight, but it didn't give me enough reason to care about the MC, even if her type of people were getting arrested, there should be a story that will make me care for her and be in her side, right now o am on nobody's side, because all o knows os that they were being hunted, but why are they getting hunted, why should I care about the getting hunted?

introduction of the character was a bit forced, they could have been more done to this first paragraph to give to life and emotion from this paragraph, all I see is wind and a girl in an alley, was it night or day?

when a mental state of a person is damaged by oast experiences, their mind sets a wall, for Ezra it is to never be under someone, never be a pawn again , and he feels that the day he bows he will become the old him from earth, weak and unable to do anything for himself, so he refuses, this is am illusion set by the mind

change will come, yeah, I think external influence will make him a better, but it will take some time , I think he will view his friends as pawns for a while, buy their importance will get higher, maybe to the point where he won't even want to sacrifice the pawn

cuz he is weaker, still if a fight broke out between them, he would surely fight. also he hated the fact that it was people that didn't do enough to get into class one, yet they were mad at the people that did. the half elf was in his right to be proud, cuz he was strong,

yhup