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tell me , so far how does the story seem to you ? it's my first time publishing one of my works and this one is a really recent idea so I'd like to know what you think
do leave a comment whenever something seems a bit abnormal , it will help me greatly . 🙏🏼
the thing is , we didn't see much of hashirama , but when shown he was someone somewhat goofy and clumsy in chilled situations and with strong convictions when needed , all I did was add a bit more depths in a few characteristics that make him up . of course all of that under my own interpretation it may differ from person to person but that is how I truly see Hashirama
hmm you are right it does feel kind of bland thanks a lot mate
something like that couldnt'tfind anything else
I'll try to find a picture of some sort
I will say this here don't even ask for a Harem , everyone has his own tast but this is not mine , rather I hate it so don't bother .
to be honest I didn't think that would be so disappointed in the taste of fanfic readers but here we are. my problem is , it's badly written like really, to give you an example : Yami finished the ninja off then went to the other one killed him killed the next one ... it's bland , there's no taste to it , and the MC is supposed to be a calculating MC etc ?? well he isnt't.
usually I wouldn't write a comment on any kind of fanfic , but this deserves one . The pace is really good it's smoothand flows without hurting my brain ,the backroung is great we have an overview about a lot of things that are interesting , our MC is likeable and doesn't act like a moron and if he does its because he's still a kid (and for me it's understandable ) we also have a picture of hiruzen which describes him perfectly as he's neither a bad guy nor an overly loving gramps , he's just incompetent like really . I know a lot of people won't like this FF because it's either "not fast enough" or there's no " harem" or no "romantic interest" let me tell you this is not a fiction written by some kid , don't try to corrupt the Story with your infantile mind.