Check more of my story on Toodat. Search for my username Forest Walker.
2023-07-19 đã tham giaGlobal
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I am loving the story so far, but the pacing is too fast that its hard for me to catch up with the changes in the story. Also, the shifting POV could confuse the readers. it honestly takes a while to get used to it.
The story is quite interesting. The battle is just on a grand scale. MC is ruthless but not without conscience. He is a master of warfare. Still, the pacing could be improved. I am excited to read more chapters.
The story didn't pick up until chapter 5. I wish it had more action scene before then. From there on, it gets more intriguing. Hopefully the action scenes improve.
This is different from the usual lightnovel I've read here on webnovel. It's a slowburn but still satisfying. The first few chapters shows the skills of the MC, but it wasn't until Chapter 8 when you will have a true glimpse of how genius he is. I am glad I gave this a try.