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The problem with creating intelligent characters is that authors also have to be intelligent. PS I hate systems and cultivation.

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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_2d
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    In my opinion meh.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

    Reincarnated as Naruto in Konoha
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    Just one criticism.

    Reincarnated as Naruto in Konoha
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    bad points in my opinion. System with conscience. The protagonist receives a lot of power for free. The protagonist is just entertainment for a God who is clearly the system and the protagonist agrees with that. the business of turning Kurama into a woman.

    Reincarnated as Naruto in Konoha
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_4d
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    One of the worst Naruto novels out there.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

    In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
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  • _DEKIM_
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    In my opinion. Bad.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

    PJO: Son of a Primordial
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · Joanjudo
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    _DEKIM_4d
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    👍

    Dragonball : Super Raditz
    Tranh châm biếm · ImagineMaker
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_5d
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    Most of the Harry Potter and Marvel novels are not good. But this is not one of them 👍✨😎

    Ch 6 Chapter 5 Hogwarts part 2
    HP: The Sorcerer Supreme
    Phim ảnh · LORD_ASHURA_
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  • _DEKIM_
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    One of the best Harry Potter novels.✨👍✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✨👍👍✨👍✨👍✨👍✨😎😎👍👍✨😎✨👍👍✨😎✨👍👍✨😎😎👍👍👍✨😎✨👍👍✨😎😎✨👍👍✨😎✨👍👍👍✨😎✨👍👍✨😎✨👍👍✨😎😎👍👍👍✨😎✨👍

    HP: The Sorcerer Supreme
    Phim ảnh · LORD_ASHURA_
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    _DEKIM_5d
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    👍

    HP: The Sorcerer Supreme
    Phim ảnh · LORD_ASHURA_
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    A perfect chapter.

    Ch 4 Chapter 4 Hogwarts part 1
    HP: The Sorcerer Supreme
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_5d
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    Ok, I read chapter 4 again and it's actually much better.👍

    HP: The Sorcerer Supreme
    Phim ảnh · LORD_ASHURA_
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_5d
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    In my opinion, the first chapters are perfect. But then came the hat part. In my opinion it was a shot in the foot

    HP: The Sorcerer Supreme
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_5d
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    Meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

    Marvel: A Devil Called The Morningstar
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  • _DEKIM_
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    I dropped it.

    Ch 14 Love & Hate
    Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
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    It would be perfect if he used the skill to erase this self-hating thing. The novel would improve 100%.

    Ch 12 Eternal Refinement II
    Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
    Tranh châm biếm · VQuintessence
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_7d
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    This thing about him hating himself is getting a little boring.

    Ch 10 Will Of Garbage
    Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
    Tranh châm biếm · VQuintessence
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_8d
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    It's not bad, but it doesn't even compare to this author's HXH novel.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

    Naruto: Shadows Of Perfection
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  • _DEKIM_
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    In my opinion, the best protagonists are those with charisma or personality.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Preparation to penetrate the unforgiving world of Hollywood and discovery of the underworld.
    Scott Pilgrim : Wait wait one minute, I’m Matthew Patel ?
    Tranh châm biếm · Herohero
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  • _DEKIM_
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    Interesting chapter.👍

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Preparation to penetrate the unforgiving world of Hollywood and discovery of the underworld.
    Scott Pilgrim : Wait wait one minute, I’m Matthew Patel ?
    Tranh châm biếm · Herohero
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  • _DEKIM_
    _DEKIM_12d
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    Whether you like it or not, mythology is a story with a beginning, middle and end. In other words, all mythology fanfics will tell the same story.

    Hades in Marvel
    Phim ảnh · User_Not_Found
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