Sri2k

Thanks

I feel that there are quite a lot of unnecessary jargons here. Although, for most people, it is not difficult to infer basedon the context, simpler words would suit the novel more.

I really liked to concept but the development is painfully slow. Some arks are way to long where skipping a few chapters won't matter. Also, although I understand that he is a 18 year old kid, he's way too indecisive which is excruciatingly frustrating.

Not a bad start. The reaction from MC towards the apocalypse was less intense than it should have been but I like ot this way.

Bad translation man. Please correct the issues and update the chapters if possible.

I agree tp what you say, but instead pf maximizing his advantage, given his system, he's letting people take advantage. Eg: 1l of water for 1 potato, clearly overpriced, yet he bought it

Liked the concept but MC's personality is not my cup of tea He's a saint not fit to survive in the apocalypse Seems to be stupid who can easily be taken advantage of. Eg: He declared that he had several resources in resource scarce world

Like the concept but the MC's personality is not my cup of tea. He's a saint not fit to survive in the apocalypse. Seems like an idiot who everyone can take advantage of. eg: Who declares that they have several resources in a resource scarce world

It'd be great if you could do that. This feels more like jotting down of abstract ideas at high level than a novel. I hope that the MC develops as a merchant, not just with respect to to system but the world as well.

There should atleast be a basic introduction of the system, it's functionality, the world, what different levels represent. It felt like I started reading a novel from somewhere is between instead of the beginning. However, the one thing that I liked most was that there was no useless mention of chat and the messages on it.