I'm really enjoying this story so far. The descriptions are very good, and it's clear that a lot of hard work has gone into crafting and making this story.

Thanks I’m glad you liked it I am reading things and working out ways to approve my writing so as I go on and write more I hope to improve and become better at writing

I’m actually going to go through my whole 13 chapters that I have posted and reediting them later and also correcting anything I feel should be corrected

This is my first time writing anything so it’s not going to be amazing or as good as someone who has written before and there will probably will be mistakes in my work but I’ll change them as i go on and get better in writing

Thank you

I am going to work on that as I write more and rewatch the movies so then I can get it as close to perfect as I can.

I put lackey because that’s what Valkyrie calls him she called him that in Thor Ragnarok so I thought it would make sense if she called him that. but as time goes on I will have her call him by his actual name