Synphomia
Nor the Symphony of Chocolate nor the Connoisseur of Chocolate nor the Cognoscenti of Chocolate is an adequate description of moi.
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You’ll get used to it lil buddy
Did not expect madafaka.
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Thanks for the feedback. It is my first book so I have a lot to learn. It seems I overdid it with making the mc too realistic/weak and didn’t properly explain the reasons for his actions. I hope you’ll give my other books a shot and or give this one another try when I edit the first chapters. Happy Reading!
I agree, he does know the game inside out so he should know how his character acts