Too much chatgpt style, you could edit a little.

looks interesting, as for the grammar, author, you should read it once again after going through IA, there are some errors.

but if you have a laptop or whatever, you can do it on the web.

You can help by sending the chapters to his email, you can copy them on the web, on your computer with right click + print.

This is so good, but the autor dead by covid... F

This is an absolute masterpiece, it definitely deserves its own animation.

Oh thanks, I already found a way, from inkstone webnovel.

I get that it is not compatible, the images are from Pinterest.

You can also contact the administrators or just create another book like the comment above.

MF

Author, I have a question, how did you change the cover?

Thanks for the chapter man, although I really want to know where to read the original chapters, I can't wait that long..

This is good, isn't it? The history.

I'll explain it to you quickly, in the Google translator, the genders are inverted, at least in English Spanish, since we do not specify a gender, we just say "El" which in English would be "He" But it is also used as "The" so which, The Ancient One translates as The Old! I'm wrong?

Plot twist: they kissed

🤤

Dumbledore

Cut

Chapter 2: Finding and Plan!

That's not the problem, I mean it all sounds epically unnecessary, it's like you're preluding something before it happens, it's all very exaggerated, also the third person feel, it's a bit awkward, you should be more lax and relax the atmosphere a bit, believe me, I know from experience, sometimes exaggerating and making something look epic is not good, Example: when I search for information on the internet, "He prepared to search the depths of the internet." those are the exaggerated lines used by AI's like Chatgpt. Whatever, don't listen to me, just be constant and you'll improve, just don't give it up, that's all.