SaraSaavedra
A taciturn addicted to mystery and suspense. @sara_saavedra89
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I love this combination of sadness and action that has this story. The plot surrounds you from the moment you read the synopsis. It can definitely become a success. Keep writing!
Hello! Congratulations on your first novel! The theme of the novel seems interesting to me and invites the reader to continue wanting to know what will continue to happen in the following chapters. Honestly, it is a novel with a lot of potential. You're doing it right! I would only advise you two issues: I think you should improve the structure of the synopsis (a lot of white space) and I think it is not necessary to use so many "hahaha" in the dialogues.
Thanks for that correction!
He has not returned. It's just a memory
Hi! Yes, it's the same house that he gave her when they got married. The point is that when Roberto gave it to her, he had assured her that no one had lived in that house before, in fact, in this chapter she remembers that she had to take care of decorating it from scratch, BUT, the unexpected visit from her friend Susana, makes her doubt that perhaps that house had been inhabited before he gave it to her. Thank you for your comments. They are very important to me.