Review Detail of MrBtheNovelist in My Unborn Son

Well written story full of emotion and intrigue... I usually read fantasy/sci-fi novels but this was a very pleasant surprise. Love the artistic flair from the usage of - in place of "" ~ Great piece of work all in all, maybe just keep in mind how the audience would read your novel on mobile and space out certain paragraphs. Other than that, I enjoyed it! Keep up the good work