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Where is invisible woman’s illustrations
At least leave her and his mom
Is his sister included in the revenge
Does that include his sister
First of all I never said he should be powerful without effort I said you gave a grand explanation for a useless ability which was stated to strengthen him only later did you include he could reanimate them. Secondly they have a top 5 guild, guild members and security detail are separate and that wasn’t even the reason, the security wasn’t there because they were lead astray or given false info by a spy from a lower family that lead multiple vehicles containing they’re security. Also they said strength is everything if she’s the matriarch even if she specializes in healing it doesn’t make sense for her not to be able to fight, doesn’t she have a bloodline. with their families beliefs it wouldn’t make sense for a defenseless healer to succeed them. You completely ignored those comments. Also I’ve seen you reply saying the mc won’t forgive any of them. If that’s the case whats the point of his mom trying to redeem herself, cuz that makes certain readers sorry for her. It would have made more sense if you kept her evil so it would be satisfying, some people would probably have conflicted feeling’s considering she was evil for like a ch then started to change.
Bro you giving mixed signals at this point
Liar you only said she taught her magic not healing magic.
Your book is honestly stupid you gave a whole ch and half to explain the universe core bs but then simply tell us he can strengthen himself without any noticeable difference waste of money unlocking those ch and why give such an explanation for a useless ability. Also what was even the point of telling his sister he’s not her brother it didn’t move the story forward or anything just made everything awkward. And your telling me his mom can’t take on c rank monsters after the whole bs about strength is everything when she herself is extremely weak what gave her the right to even shun him when she’s just as pathetic. In this world they haven’t cracked dna tests but they’re as advanced as us in every other way, every important thing is just inconsistent cuz of poor planning his moms weak but she’s the matriarch, she’s the matriarch but she doesn’t control their guild they’re one of the strongest families but a lower family controls they’re security detail the book is honestly trash. The worst part is the author isn’t open to criticism he just acts like he doesn’t see it. It’s also annoying that the major mistakes are so fucking basic.
Why is he hiding exactly and from who and wouldn’t that just stunt his growth cuz they would treat him like he’s weaker than he is therefore anything taught to him is something that he already knows thereby just wasting his time.
Lost me with the strong acting weak it’s the dumbest tag and half the time authors do it for no reason