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I have read a few chapters. the writing quality is good in my opinion but I think you need to polish your storytelling. You have to add more description to the events that happen during each scene to help people visualise the scenes. looking forward to seeing how it goes
if you have time I hope you can review my work too. thanks
I like the concept and the author seems to know how to make his word impactful. looking forward to seeing how the story goes
No. i don't plan on making it a harem
here's one for Jayden.
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thank you 👍 i Will take note of your suggestions
thank you 🙏
noted. i will try to improve on my next chapters. thanks