I wanted to add a scene where Paul brings a boulder or two to their house to teach Dante. However, it will just increase the word count and I wasn't in the mood to explain at that time.

Let's say he met someone overpowered

It's better than a 10-year-old older brother

what?

Even so, that's his dream

Well, let's just say he is built differently. Nornally, a boy of his age can't do it, but he can. I know, like he is a blessed child just like Zanoba.

Well, turning point is coming sooner than we think. So, I decided to speed up the process.

Define what's normal to you. Is my dialogue too advanced for your "Human" mind can comprehend? Just because I chose the finest vocabulary, doesn't mean it is considered robotic.

I don't get it. He just apologized and told his reason why he was tapping his feet. Where's the "treating like an employee" in there? If you're such an expert in criticizing my work, why don't you demonstrate to me how it's done.

So, you want it to sound like slang and informal, is that right?

I did what I could to make it sound human, and it wasn't enough

so you want more "Umm" and "Ah" to the dialogue. Was it not enough?

Also, I read the novel. Her dialogues in there are also formal.

Aisha is trained to be a maid, so formality is not farfetched

For range damage and utility purposes. I mean he's bound to encounter enemies out of his reach.

I wanna do both melee and magic. But yeah, he's melee oriented

Well, in the first chapter, the MC was working on some computer programming and he could use this skill set to reprogram the counterfeit Raiden.

yes

Hello everyone, Author-san here. I'm just going to put this here because not a single soul ever reacted to the things I write so far. I did my best and thought to myself, I deserve a bit of some credit. If someone reads this, please give me some worthwhile feedback and a compliment, because I need it to have the motivation to go on.

You want the next chapter to be cheesy? Got it.