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TempestNotion

TempestNotion

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I am an amateur writer and I write for entertainment only. I'm not particularly good at my writing skills but I will do my best.

2022-08-31 đã tham giaPhilippines
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  • TempestNotion
    TempestNotion1d
    trả lời 17541916_Black

    He has beginner fire and water magic. Can spar with Paul despite only knowing beginner sword god style.

    Ch 19 An Imposter Among Us
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    trả lời Asir_Sandman

    For a couple of days, until she learns the Human Language.

    Ch 18 Don't Disappoint and Work Hard
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    trả lời Stunn691

    I did my best though

    Nanahoshi and I exchanged a solemn glance, the weight of their despair pressing down on us. I took a deep breath and spoke again, "Don't worry, everyone. I will help all of you from your anguish. For I, Dante Greyrat aspired to be a hero."
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    TempestNotion2d
    trả lời Stunn691

    There

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    TempestNotion2d
    trả lời Roulette_Joker

    He's 4 years old, give him a break

    Nanahoshi and I exchanged a solemn glance, the weight of their despair pressing down on us. I took a deep breath and spoke again, "Don't worry, everyone. I will help all of you from your anguish. For I, Dante Greyrat aspired to be a hero."
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    trả lời Coldman

    :)

    Ch 18 Don't Disappoint and Work Hard
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    trả lời chrnocross

    Someone finally get the reference

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    trả lời Stunn691

    Could you explain?

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    TempestNotion4d
    trả lời Ataturk_Monstrus

    They're traveling

    Ch 10 Journey to the Dragon Sovereign's Domain
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    TempestNotion4d
    trả lời Ataturk_Monstrus

    Be patient

    Ch 9 Next Course of Action
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    TempestNotion4d
    trả lời DBoblivion

    If you have something to suggest in order to fix this plot hole, it would be nice. I'll rewrite it anytime

    Ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
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    TempestNotion5d
    trả lời DBoblivion

    Again, forgive my terrible timing, okay? I overestimate the speed of the refugee camp's construction.

    Ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
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    TempestNotion5d
    trả lời DBoblivion

    Well, let's see, around 5-6 days later. Forgive me for my terrible track of time in my story. I don't know how long it takes for a person to travel from point A to B on foot, plus teleportation circles.

    Ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
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  • TempestNotion
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    trả lời Jobywankenobi

    I will address that in the next chapter

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  • TempestNotion
    TempestNotion5d
    trả lời Jobywankenobi

    I mean he is a grumpy old farmer, so the name fits

    The butler sighed, "Yes, Eustace. They're here to help you out."
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    trả lời Jobywankenobi

    Yeah, just a nice reference to throw in

    "I see~ What a cute duo," the nurse remarked friskily. "My name is Florence Nightingale. You cuties will help me sort these medical pills, okay?"
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    trả lời Jobywankenobi

    Eeey~ Did you get it?

    "Hmm, I suppose a kid is alright," he said with a curt nod. "My name is Ramdon Gorsey, you youngsters will be giving these soups to those people. Got it?"
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  • TempestNotion
    TempestNotion6d
    trả lời TempestNotion

    So please choose your words when criticizing my work and don't insult me.

    Ch 4 Learning the Art of the Blade
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  • TempestNotion
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    trả lời passatempo

    Look dude I did my best to put some effort into my work. but some people were quite harsh with their words and it made me upset. Like my dialogues are too robotic, and my narratives are too advanced. Things like that demotivate me from writing

    Ch 4 Learning the Art of the Blade
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    trả lời passatempo

    Not that Dante

    Ch 1 A Second Chance for a Brave Soul
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