iwo835

Great novel, I liked it very much. Your dialogues are good, you have a nice world building and the characters are great. The best thing is that you have smooth writing and good grammar, which is 90% of a novel. Keep up the good work!!

If you're the type that likes reading VR-related stories then try tis novel out, if not you are missing out on something. Your world build is great, and so are the characters, there are some grammar errors in the novel, but they are only small and can happen to anyone. Overall, this is a 4.5/5, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes Video Games Novels :)

just say 100 then

The first chapter was a great start to the novel, and it kept on going like that. You introduced the characters in a great way and made them very interesting to read. Recommend this to anyone who likes to read revenge novels. (myself)

great start, I hope she gets ger revenge

interesting

Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel. Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.

A typical gamer

That's somewhat interesting

I have never read a horror story before, and I don't really like them, but yours got me hooked on. The characters are great and the world is built well. The only thing is that I have problems reading it, the grammar is not very good. But besides that, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes horror <3