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Thanks for your review. I am sure that this will help me improve in the future.

Thanks for your review. It's actually a story about Multiverse so I could guess where you find it deficult.

To be honest there was approx no problem in this book. Instead, this book was enjoyable although its pacing was slow at the beginning, it's normal the only thing I felt is weak about this book is the world background. It was a bit difficult to understand what you said at first but after reading a few chapters I cot to know your writing style and now it's not a problem anymore. Overall its a pretty sold piece of story and I a glad to read it.[img=recommend]

thanks for your review.

thanks I will

well i am still a bigger in all of this but I think I could improve over time so stay tuned because this is just the prologue of the my huge story