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le Akuma - Actually is Yuki
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So far I like the Story, I would like to ask tho , What is "DXD"? I see it like everywhere when it comes to Fan-Fics.
you forgot the "most" before powerful
you forgot something "Best Uniform"
bro use your good writing Quality to make your own. Instead of copying someone's work, from the beginning to CH17 its literally copied from this https://www.webnovel.com/book/surviving-the-zombie-apocalypse-with-my-military-system_27224155305825805. (they changed some minor details but you will still see the similarity)
Writing Quality is okay Updates MEH Story - Copied from this Novel (https://www.webnovel.com/book/surviving-the-zombie-apocalypse-with-my-military-system_27224155305825805) Character Design - Copied from this Novel (https://www.webnovel.com/book/surviving-the-zombie-apocalypse-with-my-military-system_27224155305825805) World Background - Copied From this novel (https://www.webnovel.com/book/surviving-the-zombie-apocalypse-with-my-military-system_27224155305825805)
you mean the exps?
Alfred Group sounds funny to me
I suggest adding () or [] so that people will recognize that this "1000/5000" is Exp
Thanos joining Nazarick
Perfect 5! (no Austrian Painter tho) I love how the story goes on, the Germany being a war-torn country but still has the spirit to protect against the invaders.(still no austrian painter btw). I had thought this is a WW2 Germany but it isnt (no Austrian painter after all), still despite this (having no Austrian Painter) the story is smooth and has many good things.
500k? what a joke.
I don't think the concept of dragons exist in germany in their Era.
No, keep that title please
Nooooooooooo , He is a Painter not a Writer
sounds a certain austrian painter to me