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Rayan_Alzahrani_44302dbình luậnCh 2 Chapter 2: A Peaceful Discussion- Rayan_Alzahrani_44305dbình luận
Bro stop talking like that’s kinda cringe just say the move
Ash: Jolteon, use Discharge! Illuminate the field with electric energy. - Rayan_Alzahrani_44305dbình luận
It’s an onix why thunder punch ?
Ash: Charizard, now's your chance! Seize it with Thunder Punch! - Rayan_Alzahrani_443013dbình luậnCh 21 Sparring Contest
- Rayan_Alzahrani_443016dbình luận
I lover her
"Good, yours is crooked. At least this way he has a fighting chance with the ladies. Or the boys. Whichever he prefers." she said caressing the boy. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443022dbình luận
Yes please i would love to read it
A/N: I am thinking about writing a pokemon fanfic. I just read Hard Enough on Royal Road and its so amazing. I just want to write something similar. It would not be exactly the same but will have a lot of similarities. I am thinking about a Larvitar as a starter. Of course it would not be given to mc just like that because of a God. It would have a backstory. What do you guys think? Oh, Yall should read Hard enough pokemon fic, its the best one I have read. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443028dbình luận
Yes please no people people suck
Alright, next vote. Should Marco travel solo? - Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthbình luận
Yayay i love ows
I turned to the origin of the voice, and spotted a giant bird staring at me with it's round orange eyes. It was an owl. A giant one, several times a human's size. - Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthbình luận[Task: Pass the chunin exam flawlessly and overwhelmingly, without losing a single time, and give a figurative slap to those who dare to spread rumors about you and defend the honor of your new family. Mercy is NOT an option!]
- Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthtrả lời Dr_Jikan
Yeah I think that’s what the British call it
"Gluttony: Dragonbeard!" His cheeks puff out and he spits out hundreds of candy flosses as fine as silk. - Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthbình luậnCh 49 Chapter 49 : Preliminary 3
- Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthbình luận
I hope vaporeon or milotic is her partner
I open my eyes and find myself looking at a blue ceiling, which is most definitely not my own as mine was white. - Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthbình luận
He should’ve answered okay takashi sensei see how he likes it
Sakura was clearly surprised and shocked, while Kaito maintained a poker face, showing no reaction. After Kakashi finished explaining the details, he summoned one of his dogs to follow Sasuke's trail. Sakura looked at Kakashi and agreed, crawling toward Naruto to wake him from the genjutsu. - Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthbình luận"Can't you see, kids? With such a display of power, even a Hokage would have to back down," Haruki said with a serious expression.
- Rayan_Alzahrani_44301mthbình luận
This is a bit of criticism hope it’s okay if not ignore it i think the chapters are too short and what the mc is doing always takes long so it takes a couple of chapters like learning a move took a couple of chapters a battle with a random trainer shouldn’t take more then a chapter you should focus on either making the chapters longer or covering more then one simple thing and muti task rather then spend the whole chapter on doing one thing
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