ywhy4_
Lv4
2022-05-26 đã tham giaGlobal
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2019
ywhy4_7hbình luậnthis is better cause I feel like the pacing of this fic is too fast and the mc hasn't properly interacted with other characters. For eg most of the training was skipped so we got close to zero conversation between the 3rd class disciples and the mc.
2) Write all important fights- ywhy4_7htrả lời tianshangshandian
oh.. then what did you find wrong in that paragraph
"Trunks, we can't die so easily, otherwise there will be no warriors to protect the earth. We must work hard to train our bodies and strive to eliminate those two damn androids as soon as possible. When I came back a few days ago, I saw that you were slacking off." - ywhy4_8htrả lời tianshangshandian
he slept for 2 days after meeting trunks.
"Trunks, we can't die so easily, otherwise there will be no warriors to protect the earth. We must work hard to train our bodies and strive to eliminate those two damn androids as soon as possible. When I came back a few days ago, I saw that you were slacking off." - ywhy4_8htrả lời GarudaTranslationCh 2 Chapter 2
- ywhy4_9hbình luận
you know it's gonna be fire when the MC's name is Vergil
Vergil's room was a typical college student's den of organized chaos. Empty energy-drink cans and bottles, snack wrappers, and different pairs of shoes were everywhere. Along with the clutter were Pokémon game cartridges and other memorabilia strewn in every direction. - ywhy4_10htrả lời ywhy4_
it would be fresh start in every world.
"Thank yo-." Just as she wanted to thank Leo, she turned around and found nothing there, except for a small note on the deck. - ywhy4_10htrả lời DThorn
I like it cause it would mean that in every world he visits, we would be able to experience new stories with more new characters to interact with.
"Thank yo-." Just as she wanted to thank Leo, she turned around and found nothing there, except for a small note on the deck. - ywhy4_10hbình luận- Companion of Ra - Activating this, the wearer would be able to summon the Flame Spirit, Ifrit to aid and protect the wearer. Can be used once a month. Ifrit can only be summoned for ten minutes.]
- ywhy4_10hbình luận".....I knew you were a stalker." Leo teased by making a disgusted expression.
- ywhy4_16hbình luận
Gwen after knowing peter is single
She tried to stay calm and sipped her hot cocoa. - ywhy4_16hbình luận
+1
- One chapter on Monday and later Saturday. - ywhy4_17hbình luận
ain't this a proposal!!
"Maybe," Kai shrugged. "That's why I'm your captain. You seem like you'll survive, so be my subordinate for life, Aya." - ywhy4_19hbình luận
mc:
I forced myself to calm down my raging urges so my involuntary biological reaction wouldn't spell my disaster. - ywhy4_1dbình luận
just one time
[Hey...I-I heard from a few sources that you have the You-Know-What, I-I kinda need it for a few purposes, *Sniff* come on now, I can pay. I need that shiitt~] - ywhy4_2dbình luận
straight to hell
At first, I sympathized with her. Knowing her story, I thought she was just a girl tormented by the desire to do her best and with a simple inferiority complex. But I quickly changed my mind when, volumes later, she turned out to be a psychopath who likes no one. She's the only person in this room that I find irredeemable. A real piece of shit.detailMy New Life in the World of Classroom of the Elite as Koenji RokusukeTranh châm biếm · Shadlight - ywhy4_2dbình luận"BEEP BEEP MOTHER FUCKER! RUN HAHAHA!" Jack's eyes almost popped out of his face as he saw Truck-kun go straight through the alley like punching straight through wet tissue paper, the walls of the surrounding buildings turning into rubble as the monolith of power went straight through the alleyway trying to run over the brunette!
- ywhy4_2dtrả lời Sword_Immortal81
others call it cope we call it hope
As he was walking he heard a roar of an engine and many honks that seemed to be warning him of an unfortunate fate. Jack turned around to see a rather large white truck driving on the sidewalk coming straight towards him! He exclaimed before getting out of the way of the Truck barely able to jump out of the way as it drove careening past him, he let out a heavy pant as he exclaimed in relief "Thank fuck! I almost died there without knowing if Gojo was going to come back or not!", He got up and started to walk ahead towards the truck to see why he almost ran him over as he saw it slow down. - ywhy4_3dbình luậnThe audience gasped, understanding the reference to Marvel's "Iron Man," where Tony Stark publicly admits, "I am Ironman."
- ywhy4_3dbình luận
just a pic should be enough
Also, should I briefly introduce the names of the new players and important characters in the novel? - ywhy4_4dbình luận
nah
"Hey there." Eric smiled as the creature licked his arm, but his smile soon turned to a grimace as he felt a sharp pain. Blood dripped as he saw the animal's barbed tongue retract. His heart pounded, and he tried to back away before remembering he was still stuck.