At last... it finally arrived after nearly a month. My hunger has been satiated at last... for now that is.

Sure. Discord?

I won't. Just need a few days off since idk wth I'm doing rn

Hungry for more. Make sure to keep uploading, or else my hunger for this novel won't be satisfied.

Author here. So uh. I don't think my novel is that great at all. If it is, please leave a comment. Thank you. and piece out.

it just keeps getting weirder and weirder, DAMNIT!

I'm... baffled. The grammatical errors, the lack of environments... everything is confusing

Confusing. Like... use the " symbol for when talking out loud, and only use the ' for when thinking. It's confusing me. And probably many, since most readers are accustomed to ' being about thought, and " being about talking

great execution but... I'm confused on the surroundings.

this bout to be good

oh yeah this is great

Can't wait for future chapters. It's great!

this bout to be good

lack of description on the surroundings, but still a great chapter honestly. For me at least

It's... great but I'm having trouble of imagining the scene

it's really great. Especially the emotional moments and comedic moments

Very good opening based on my opinion. Keep going!