Frost_write
im a writer and a little inexperienced
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Thie chapter is a bomb, whoever the author is, is sure very creative and good with dialogues. Mostly the ML character as it is hidious, I'll prefare of you make him more wicked you know. Nice job great one.
I'm a sorry author but this is the best I can give you. I'm not trying to hurt your feelings but. The writing quality is full of grammatical errors that make a reader confuse. I just started the first chapter and I wasn't halfway through when I lost interest and dropped it. Although the rest won't tell you this I hope you improve and write calmly.
Sigh, dear Daoist can you give this author a chance to go far with this novel? So that you can understand it? one Mark is not gay. That's why I didn't tag the LGBT. you will find out when I update it. please don't drop. the novel and note that I'm trying to write what might happen in real life so bear with me
How, please . I don't understand?
I need a review like this on my novél so that i.kighy know where to correct my mistake.