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FoxyTale2mthtrả lời ZetswayYeah but he’s corrupted by the stone so he decided to eliminate all life since that would mean no life would be put to harm anymore
After all, if everyone is gone, then, isn't that simply protecting them all the time?- FoxyTale2mthbình luận
I think you meant Isagi
Chigiri Hyoma also smiled and bumped fists with Kira, thus confirming the two teams. - FoxyTale3mthbình luậnCh 1 i am blackbeard?
- FoxyTale3mthtrả lời BlakLordCh 3 : Innate Potentials
- FoxyTale3mthbình luận
Make her waifu
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Author should’ve put this in the novel category not the fanfic
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Breh .-.
"Western Reaper, Death, Blood-Red Scythe, Fast Scythe Unmatched, Gothik Gotic, I owe you a favor!" - FoxyTale4mthbình luận
Breh .-.
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Literally stripping him of his uniqueness
"I don't know… could you unlock her Magic potential to be as high as mine? And maybe all my kids will have at least this level?" - FoxyTale5mthbình luận
I thought last chapters were fine except maybe the sudden call out of the “mysterious” female. the sudden energy spike would’ve been more natural and enough reason for him to go there then things can go from there
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I’m sure he would’ve been fine lol
"The reason I'm telling you this is because I can't stand seeing you wandering in vain." - FoxyTale5mthbình luận
Bruh, this makes no sense at least make it understandable
"Don't run, it's easy to fall into other worlds." - FoxyTale5mthbình luận
😑😑😑
He had to wait until he found the Kryptonian's old spaceship and drank a bowl of soul chicken soup from his father, Jor-El. - FoxyTale5mthtrả lời Grammy
Maybe it’s different, Saitama had limitless physical capabilities but MC is soul and has spiritual power it could lean towards that instead of physical power
I got this idea from the story: Limitless Flame. I try not to make it the same, but similar. The MC's situation is different anyway. - FoxyTale5mthbình luận
Could you use English for haki, it’s confusing seeing those names when people are used to English version
There hasn't been any such a thing for now, but you never know what might happen. My Haki has grown leaps this year. Not really Busoshoku or Kenbunshoku, but Haoshoku. I unlocked it a few weeks ago. The moment when I increased gravity to 6x normal gravity, I was pushed to the ground, and using all of my willpower, I managed to slowly push myself off the ground. I didn't even realise it at the time, that I had unlocked it. Haoshoku Haki is similar to Reiatsu, but different at the same time. It is literally forcing my will onto reality. - FoxyTale5mthtrả lời Venerable_One
Hitsugaya is over a hundred but looks like a kid
I wasn't even going at it for more than 10 minutes when my grandfather stormed into the room and forbade me from training my body. He was really angry too. I was a bit mad at first but quickly understood that he was only worried about me. He said something about stunting my growth. But I knew that couldn't be true. I already was taller than kids my age. - FoxyTale5mthbình luận
I think you should keep a dialogue together not spaced.
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The last dialogue could’ve been an explanation for her fanaticism, it doesn’t need to be in the conversation
"It's no bother! If it is your will, my king, Alan, whatever you wish to do to me, or desire from me, I will give willingly, to the best of my ability!" Irina declared. "Without your divine protection from above, our elven kind could never have prospered and thrived as we do now. We wouldn't have been able to reclaim our ancestral lands: the shores of the Crystal Lake, the Wind-Singing Gorge, and the resplendent Isle of Brilliance!"detailI've Already Become the Almighty God, Yet the Game Has Just Begun?Kỳ huyễn · Sugar_Chestnuts - FoxyTale7mthbình luận
I think your over explaining, some dialogue should’ve remained his thought like the last few paragraphs. There’s no need to share his thought out loud especially when it’s explaining stuff
Ch 1 Chapter1-The Elf Queen and Alan the AlmightydetailI've Already Become the Almighty God, Yet the Game Has Just Begun?Kỳ huyễn · Sugar_Chestnuts - FoxyTale7mthbình luận
😑😑😑
No, he will not die, neither of us will, "we will not die, I refuse to die having just arrived in this world" I said aloud, then pulled my lips back from my mouth, exposing my long fangs and letting out a hiss of fury, gripping my spear tighter and ready to fight.