The start is a suspense let's see where it's going . I commend the author for the creativity.

I appreciate

Thankyou so much, for the gift.

noted thanks

thanks

thanks

good

thanks 😊

you're welcome 😊

it's a nice story if you take your time writing the details, it's too breath causing some confusion when reading. don't assume we know what you're writing about ,we wanna read everything you mean. the development is nice. Fix the errors

am i reading this paragraph wrong or it needs correction?

Am finding a missing word here, can you fix it