The difference between stealth and concealed presence is basically with stealth you can still be seen or hear/smell them while concealed presence takes that away if I'm correct.

ophis from dxd lol

right I was like. How. When. i dont remember reading about him having one lol.

he is maxing them out or close to as maxing them out. I just don't want to keep writing his status every five minutes.

yes it's an AU. Should of mention that my bad. I didn't think of having bell in this story it just sort of happened. I wrote what's on my mind at the time so yea.

what can I say lol I'm in a good mood today.

Your Welcome even I know it's overdone

Thank you.

interesting. very interesting.

BANG! BANG! BANG! SHOTS FIRED!!!!

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true but remember she gets stronger when she's mad and also gets stronger the more she kills. this is most likely her default strength. Not her true strength.

I've already read way past this chapter but I just gotta say one thing. BEST MOM EVER.

Honestly, To much freaking details and explanations. like seriously. I'm glad you know your stuff and all but making entire chapters basically info dump kills the story fast. it's fine to give a brief explanation but don't use the entire freaking chapter. The story had an interesting concept and was looking forward to reading it but not so much anymore. only like 5 chaps at most and I'm already dropping it because I hate info dumps. If you don't mind that kind of thing then this might be a good story for you. Heck I don't even mind slow building stories as long as it's entertaining and doesn't have mile long explanations. That's why I'm giving a lot a 3 because I neither like nor hate this story other than the fact I'm dropping it. My suggestion to you author is to not put to much information and explanations in the chapters. If we are curious about something, then we can look it up to find out ourselves. Not hating on ya but just giving some advice. I'm a writer to though I don't post stories online because I don't want to have to get a schedule to upload chaps. Anyways, good luck and enjoy.

interesting way to start a story with a synopsis as well. well done my friend.

sounds kinda like nerigante armour from monster hunter world

sounds like SAO the one that starts with A. Don't know how to spell it.

~The only way to truly write a depressing and dark story is to experience the pain yourself~

Honestly, the story was freaking awesome. Read all 82 chaps pretty quickly. The only issue I have is the fact that there are no new chaps being posted. it has such an interesting story line. sure some people might think the MC is op or has hacks but the grand priest has a power level of 969 Googolplex I believe. anyways one Googolplex has a thousand zeroes after the one so yeah food for thought. Anyways the story was awesome and very entertaining. I especially love the romance in it. I don't mean the R-18 content only. I'm interested in seeing who he gets. Im hoping for chronoa, vado, cus, and towa. That's just me though lol. I will definitely recommend this to a friend and hope that the author will make chapters again soon. honestly in my opinion, this story is to good to be abandoned. It's not often I find stories that draw me in. Anyways, I like how he keeps messing up the timeline and can't wait to see what happens to the baka Fu if the author continues this story.

I get them mixed up a litty