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please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential
It is said that the ambushers of Hiruzen will need protection from Fujin
It was said that if Kurama was sealed inside Hashirama, Kurama would be his Jinchuriki
That starting sentence was so good
That Mayari's Temple sounds very, very familiar
Unrelated but I read the author's pilot chapter in his potential second work in patreon and even though I don't have the funds to b a supporter, I would like to suggest instead of "A bloody path" make the title something like "a path painted in red" or "a path littered with blood", I would love to read it regardless though
Oh... oh no...
Oh shit, Yuki
I say a divider should be here like three asterisks or whatever, it feels liek there is no mental transition effect of there are none
A little bit edgy, but I suggest "Naruto: The Crimson Waves" if he/she is from the Bloody Mist