ChosenSage
Just trying to turn a hobby into something more
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Eh, yes and no, it’s less about her and more about his pride and the fact that she hadn’t died in one strike, which he favors doing, it’s a pride thing who cares ab that girl lol
Hey just read it, got some suggestions if you wanna read em. I suggest taking those first two chapters off and adding that authors note to the start or end of your first chapter. Now for the writing, it kind of falls flat, like the whole killing father thing should probably be described. Don’t tell show basically. It’s not bad but just take your time, you could have a chapter of introductory stuff so people can get a feel for your main character and his personality and such, rather than him just saying how he is
Well yeah, never said it would be successful, we early stages right now lol I’m just giving insight to Hado’s mindset
It’s true🤷🏽♂️
It is a fanfic of Akame Ga kill👍
Ohhh ye I should have been more clear. Akg is short for “Akame Ga Kill” lol
It’s in the name of the fic lol
Yeah it’s disgusting reading it, now imagine writing it💀
Not exactly, if he were to do something that mimicke that, the people would be dead and instead simply be nests for the insects he puts inside of them, allowing the insects full access to the now dead persons nerves and allat