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attrape_reves1mthbình luậnhi! So I managed to find your story after watching your chosen reaction vid and I love the opening premise! Bless you brother! The only thing I'd add is if perhaps you could add some more sensory language and more imagery to make it more immersing? For example, "In the depths of a very cold and dark place, the darkness against my skin feels like a heavy blanket. Suffocating and squashing any hint of light. Its chilling darkness seeps into my very bones, settling in with an icy grip." A line like this can draw more readers in and it sets the setting. You're free to use this by the way! Anyways, I love the story you're going for! Keep up the good work!!
Ch 1 Fantasy Mission In Purgatory- attrape_reves3mthbình luận
english is not englishing in the descriptions
At that moment, a streak of light pierced the sky, shining brilliantly and dazzlingly, and for an instant, outshining the flickering lightning and illuminating the gloomy, dark sky like daylight.detailUnstoppable Martial Arts: Starting from Attribute Points AllocationHuyền huyễn · Sad wind turns the sunset - attrape_reves8mthtrả lời Hacker_69
YESSIR~
Is being a nerd contagious? - attrape_reves11mthtrả lời
Yes. It is. I think it is. Cuz I'm one of em.
Is being a nerd contagious? - attrape_reves1yrbình luậnAlthough Qiao Mei was totally a city dweller in her other life, she loved plants and yearned for a rural life. She really liked crops and vegetables.
- attrape_reves1yrbình luận
Sounds like Naruto. Minus the crushed soda cans.
I was 23 but had nothing but the clothes on my back to my name. My one-room apartment was filled to the brim with empty ramen packets and crushed soda cans. - attrape_reves1yrbình luận
The mom is...a Karen?
"What do you mean? My daughter just asked who we were. She must have damaged her brain. What if the aftereffects affect her college entrance examination? Then wouldn't our family have paid for her school fees for so many years for nothing? You have to make up for our losses. I will never agree to only 80,000 yuan!" Shan Yue's mother, Sun Ling, was anxious. She glanced at the stocky Shan Yue on the hospital bed and continued to shout with her hands on her hips. - attrape_reves1yrtrả lời Tar_taglinesCh 10 CH 8: Afterschool Murder Plans
- attrape_reves1yrbình luận"Then you should start using your eyeballs to read the instructions first rather than checking out the staff. It's clearly written that all the computers have data about which book is located at which section and bookshelf right down to the exact position from left or right of the shelf. Type in the book name, and you will get it. Now, leave."
- attrape_reves1yrbình luận
Ambiverts and Introverts alike. Arise.
"I don't like bothering people." - attrape_reves1yrtrả lời king_Gurra10Ch 6 CH 4: Nostalgic Memories
- attrape_reves1yrbình luậnCh 4 III
- attrape_reves2yrtrả lời Rafcedeno
me four 😂✋
To become the Greatest Showman. - attrape_reves2yrbình luận
Rapists alert! I know why big brother Chris webt full on rage mode! SAVE BELLA!
They smelled of booze and cigarettes, they tried to touch me and I was scared and I tried to get them to back off I tried to fight, I swinged my bag at them but they caught it and were now angry and one of the guy pushed me down and was getting close, they all started to laugh and it felt like a group of hyenas. - attrape_reves2yrtrả lời Jack_ripper_7274
Damn! He broke the fucking table with his failed backflip and poor person 😂😂🤣🤣
I looked at her and said "Respectable choice." - attrape_reves2yrtrả lời attrape_reves
Can't find any buff gifs of him
Ch.3 Getting Ripped. - attrape_reves2yrtrả lời TyphonWyllt
My man Arnold is buff 💪~ His body legit looks like real life Baki.
Ch.3 Getting Ripped. - attrape_reves2yrbình luận
You know when he said this I thought he was being sarcastic till I saw 'Well this body does.' So I'm like ok. He sarcastic yet he ain't being sarcastic. Ok. I get you bro.
After Government which is just political science with attitude. We had my favourite Trigonometry, I absolutely adore maths, I mean this body does, for some reason and when we were sitting in Trigonometry, I could feel like someone was watching me and that someone was Jessica. - attrape_reves2yrbình luận
I like OC Bella more then OG Bella because OG Bella I kinda of ✨AnNoYiNg✨
She said, "You are scaring them away." - attrape_reves2yrbình luận
highlights??
I looked at myself, I wasn't particularly fit, but my face was a good feature of mine. I had a clear complexion, my nose was not pointy and long and I had sharp facial features, my eyes were a mixture of brown and a hint of green.