The story idea is awesome, and the story they are reacting is great. However the grammar and often misleading and confusing story format can make it hard to read like when they are replying, or simply how they react is not the best or in character.

I will be updating later this week, maybe next at the latest.

Can you further clarify what you mean by the comment?? But if you mean that Yuuya can understand that there will be girls who fall for him, then yes, his skill will make sure of that.

Only the first chapter and even that its different, after the second chapter its completely different.

For those wondering why these are quotes in the creator's thoughts, they have {hints} to future lore, also many answers can be found within the [system], flashbacks, quotes, and most importantly creator thoughts where many future secrets lay answers to.

i read that as 'I was in your house of course I know'