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Some of the devil may cry crew could join plus devil arms could be a good way to arm himself without destroying the bank.

Supreme strange from marvel what if. sorcery in marvel can be taught to anyone plus after his universe is destroyed he could be easily convinced by offering him a place in his universe in exchange for teaching him.

Didn't he get a reward a bit back for another person to get a diary? is it a he chooses when it happens situation or has the author forgot

I would think that it would be a good way to bring the sorcerers into the story in a natural way being a kind of mystic enemy.

Ruby Green Eyes? I don't think that make sense. Did you mean emerald green

So they are gonna attack in new York at a business that both tony and the fantastic 4 have stakes in. I doubt tony and reed would sit still and let it happen.

Too those who are looking at this story and thinking that's it might be good do yourselves a favor and don't read this disappointment. This story was good and had a lot of potential from ch1-20 it was good and showed great potential, so it more infuriating how it takes a nose dive the next 10 chapters. for starters the biggest red flag is the fact that the MC has multi personalities being created as personas in his body. now I've yet to see a webnovel that does this concept at all well that doesn't just ruin the story and here yes it ruins the story. the author tried defending it but if so many people are saying it's stupid maybe just maybe they have a point. As if that wasn't enough and you continued reading it gets worse as the next world his personality it practically wiped and he forgets who he is. thats the point I gave up on this novel went downhill from ch 20 onward and kept falling. Author if your reading this you majorly f***** up. I don't care enough anymore to continue reading this story whether 10-20 chapters down the road it's all explained it doesn't matter cause those 20 chapters are not gonna be well received. you commented regularly about people calling things stupid if it's that bad maybe you should look at why. if the concept is s*** and hated whether it makes sense or not people won't like it and judging from chapter comments a lot of people dropped this early on.

you know a ***** pov sub titles wouldn't go amiss and would help with keeping up with the shifting locations and people. just a recommendation

Great novel and most certainly better than it competition, some things I will advise the author to do though Add **** pov so we know who is talking let us see some other lords POV and not just governers. I want to see Li Yu POV since he seems like the cliche chinese lord and we know it isn't going well due to the protagonist.

I wanted to like this I really did and it got of to a very strong start. buuuut in the words of some commenters you can remove the marvel parts and the story won't be any different. by around chapter 20 theres percy jackson and i swear half the chapters after that revolved around that part of the world then were back to marvel for about 5 chapters until were of to another world. The biggest complaint about this story is the fact it straight up lies to people and for the first 10 or so chapters fools people into thinking this is a marvel fanfic but it isn't so don't read this hoping for a marvel fanfic because it ain't.