PewPewBoomSplash
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The story is interesting and characters are unique so that you can get invested in them. there are some typographical errors and grammar mistakes, but not enough to distract from the story. Keep it up author!
The book starts out with a pretty relatable activity and allows the author to paint a vivid picture of the scene and characters present. Its an immersive approach and right as you're getting pulled in you're suddenly thrust into the action, its an impressive approach! It allows the worldbuilding and the character development to flow seamlessly into the story!
"as long as they can move" "we'll take people in a vegetative state" seems contradictory, or am I reading too much into it?
This review is occurring in the early stages, but I still find that this story has drawn my interest. The grammar seems to be on point and doesn't detract from the story at all. The personalities of the individuals we've met are starting to be developed, and it's exciting to see how they will shape up over time! The world building is starting to take form and isn't happening in the way of 'infodumps' which is great news for everyone! The first chapter leaves us wondering and questioning, which is great! I hope you give this book a try, it's definitely worth a read!