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bro I love this book keep up the great work
an author when are you going to upload a new chapter
first off I want to say it was so difficult for me to refine this book again I read this book a long time ago probably around 5 months ago when this chapter came out I was reading this book during the time I was at school and then I took little break from it but I didn't realize I did not have this book saved in any of my playlist and eventually I got out of my red list and a few weeks later I forgot about it could have been maybe a month or more I don't know it was just a while I searched for it I could not find it I searched up nard till I searched up High School of the Dead I could not remember the name and I could not remember the tags and I tried to find a multiple times but I can never find it but this time I was watching a movie about zombies and I was like I'm kind of wanting to read a book about zombies and this book came to mind so I thought hard and I remember that this book is quite pervy so I put in tags that were pervy I think I found this in the smut of fanfic after searching for a long time it could have been the other category that starts with an e but I believe it was the smut category but the key point is I finally found this book so I'm happy
she's extremely hot like extremely extremely hot you got to add her to your harem also can you just imagine the children between you two that would be some horrifying strong children
it's crazy how people can get away with stuff like this on this app
good I personally don't know much about Hades I actually I think I know more about Zeus the god of lightning more since all I hear about is him r#ping everyone but I do like Hades a lot but that could just be because he has power over death and I love the element of death
what's the name of the book?
I'll give it a shot I can't promise I will like it
I am trying to be understandable but I am human so I am also selfish it's been 5 months since I have had to wait to read such an awesome book and wait for a chapter it does not have to be perfect it can be at 80% and it'll be a great chapter you're a great author to Great Book and I hope you up upload soon and have a good day
they would at least try to take his Beyblade and even one year ago when I read this book I said it was a good book I hope all my tips are useful and I hope you don't drop this book since it's great
awesome the beginning seemed really rushed so you could possibly slow it down a little bit explain more things like what does The Hideout look like what is his relationship with doji or Ryuga or any other members what did his room look like when he woke up and what was his memories of 14 years in the Beyblade World and maybe during his trainer key runs into dark nebula because realistically with how rich and Powerful that organization is at that time there is no way of 14-year-old would be able to escape and not be found quickly even if he is strong enough to defeat everyone there they would continuously chase him unless there was a reason not to but they are a power hungry organization so they obviously would not let go of such a powerful Blader
I just reread all your chapters I like them I would say there's a few grammar errors in the chapters are extremely short since only took me 18 minutes to read I think like five chapters you could also maybe go into a little bit of detail about his training Arc or you can keep it how it is and just make it so he has flashbacks during his training Arc I was kind of hoping he was going to have a good relationship with Ryuga since he's my favorite character and I have read this book one year ago love finding comments that I left before also does this book have Romance cuz that would be awesome if it did I would preferably choose I think her name is Sophie her Beyblade is a white whale and she is part of the team with that one rich guy who also has a bay that can rotate to the left and it's black Bay if that makes sense
don't you just love it when you find your own comment in a book that you've read before but you couldn't quite remember
plus I read this book a long time ago I might not remember much about it but I'm sure it's a good book
please make this one there are so many Black Clover books but there are so few Beyblade books and I am so happy that you have decided to continue this or at least a possibility of it so please continue
what does the appearance of MC look like and who does MC get with? and what's the upload schedule?
I don't have any Stones it's too early so it has not refreshed yet but if I did I would give you one this is such an awesome book keep up the great work
hope you have a good day and I hope you got the message
sorry to burst your bubble but this is a DC Universe the MC mentioned it in one of the chapters but I agree this is a good mythology book even if they did not have DC in it of course I am happy it has DC in it since it means more action and more interesting things happening