MonokumaIzuru

I speak on the subject of blood only hahaha[img=recommend]

I also think the same and if he does that it is very predictable.They can also create a clone.....although in the unlikely event that it's female*cough* Power Girl*cough* I wouldn't complain so much.

Una pregunta todavía habrá yanderes(?)?(era una cosa que engancho al instante jajaja y el drama y los celos)

I understand but I'm a bit lost on the subject of heroines (or I'm too stupid to understand hahaha) And it also leaves me with a bad taste, leave this criticism so tomorrow I will remove it permanently or maybe today I don't like leaving this type of criticism and adding the fact that it is your first story (although it would have been interesting if a female protagonist appeared as a certain manhua "I I became the villain of my video game" it's very funny, there are a lot of references even if you don't take it very seriously when you see it) Be sure to see how this story progresses in the meantime[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Abigail creo que es de fate y la otra es de un anime llamado Haiyore(hace años que lo que nostalgia) creo

Realmente lo hiciste eh... si sirve de algo solamente imaginense que tiene enanismo(que tecnicamente es correcto en el caso de Yue por su genetica aunque no soy un medico asi que no se si sea cierto ya que lo busque en Google) como Edward aunque sea para aligerar un poco la situacion (siendo sincero no me esperaba que hicieras lo veia mas como un meme que algo serio esos lolicones si que son persitentes aunque esta situacion es muy divertida tambien y espero ver cuando se enteren las demas lolis eso sera tan divertido jaja) Pero bueno

Is there any way I can send you my review privately?

Two chapters in one day that's cool

Because the dream of getting One Piece is not very original (going to the cliché in One Piece fanfics) and also I did not assume anything, I just asked but maybe it is because English is my second language and I confuse the words or that I do not understand what I want to express and again I apologize if my comment caused you any kind of discomfort I just wanted to clarify some doubts and mention raijin because I would have liked to see him with those scales-armor it was very epic and I thought that with a zoan type fruit that result could be achieved With that said very good story I will continue watching this story until the end And an apology for calling the dream of getting One Piece cliché 😄😁👍🙇‍♂️

I have two important questions, the first one, why didn't you give him a mythical zoan-type fruit, Raijin model? I think it's possible} and also having little information about Dragon, it's very risky to give him that fruit you gave him at the beginning) And the second why did you give him that goal? (I thought you were going to give him the same dream as the original Sinbad and because of that speech he gave in the second dungeon that completed a nation) And I don't know if this is a criticism or not and if this annoys you I sincerely apologize and I also love the story but the chapters are very short it's my opinion 😄