This story gives me the cool vibes of my current favorite animes Like Reincarnated As A Slime or So, I Got Reincarnated As Spider, So What? it's very interesting and nicely imagined. Although there are some misused punctuations and grammatical errors, your story is still very interesting.
From the beginning, it is quite interesting and I like how detailed you are with your description as the story goes. There are a few grammar mishaps, but it is a good story!
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It is going good so far and I do find this interesting! Although there is a little bit of grammar error, this story shows promise and I am excited to where this story might lead to.
The Imperfections of Prodigies (REWRITING IN PROGRESS)
This story shows promise and excitement! I like how you portray the emotions for the main character and I like how the action goes. Though there are some grammar mishaps and spelling, it's got potential! 👌
I have to say I am quite intrigued with this mix of history with gaming like stats! Makes me think of the popular reincarnation animes right now! This shows promise! Liking a lot!
I like it overall. Your play with words and how you describe the situations along with the background are spot on. Your character build up is nice too especially equipped with such nice choice of words. It's a chef's kiss for me.