Holo_Lover

For those of you who came to the reviews to see if it's worth reading, just know that if you are very particular about how the author writes, plot holes and everything else, then this book is not for you. The book is well written, there are almost no grammatical errors, but there are many things that could have been done better. However, as the author mentioned, he is just doing this for fun in his free time. In short, if you are very critical, don't read it, you won't like it. If you read just for fun, like me, then I recommend reading it, it's an interesting story despite everything.

Did she forgot about the ZZZ MC's? Or hasn't been a day yet?

Actually the kryptonians learning skills is god-like. Superman once had to lear medicine to save Louis, and in 10 minutes, reading all of the books in the library, he became a full doctor

I see. A suggestion, if you'd like. Just use the MC lover's names normally in general contexts, and in moments of lemon and romance use whatever terms of endearment you want to use. Like, they're with their team? She call her M'gann or Miss Mars. They are alone in MC's room? She calls her love, babe, etc. The thing is, there is no problem with the MC calling M'gann love, babe, etc, but it's weird when it's used all the time.

Just one thing that bothers me and I wanted to say, the MC calling M'gann 'My Love' all the time. Honestly, it's VERY cheesy and weird, they are teenagers who have been dating for less than a month, not an old couple in their 70s. This isn't constructive criticism or anything, or me asking the author to change this, it's just something that has been bothering me and wanted to say. Other than that, great story.

I guess I will make one

I agree.

I already have an Overlord fic, it's called Overlord: Guild Wars

and you are absolutely right, i just didint think i needed to change Rimuru and Clayman clash

You can, I'm home already