Holo_Lover

Is this a book by the same author as the book WiseTl is translating? If so, I think I'll really like it.

Haven't read yet, but since it's close to 10 reviews, I will help.

Of all the fan-fics that the author has been translating, if he asked me how many of them were Chinese fan-fics in a quiz, the only one I would know for sure is this one. Why? Well, let's just say that many Chinese fan-fic authors have a horrible habit of making the MC force women in one way or another to love and adore them - as was seen with Raiden Shogun here - when they don't know what to do to progress in romance. I remember a fic a few years ago where I read a HxH fan-fic, it was great, until the author literally gave a slavery system to the MC, where he could summon female characters. Honestly, I think this is SO shit. That's really my only criticism of the book, other than that it's really fun, and the translation is impeccable.

The posted chapters are free on your patreon or paid?

Author, why did you delete the book Master of Weapons in GI? It was getting so good ;(

It's a good read, I liked the way the author managed to make a fast-paced story that didn't got boring, it has a lot of details about the world, the MC and interaction between the characters even though it's fast. Of course, the book also has its cons, the protagonist had moments...not very intellectually brilliant, and the chapters are quite short compared to the speed at which the story is progressing, but I think the update speed makes up for that. Anyway, it's good and interesting, worth reading. One question however, author, will the book remain this fast-paced forever or just until they leave Raccoon City? Even though I don't see a problem with the chapters being that fast, I still miss a deeper immersion in the story, which is one of the main problems in fast-paced stories.

To be quite honest, the DXD and Hellsing part left me quite absorbed in reading, but when it got to the Harry Potter part... It left me disappointed, it's as if the story went from 100 points to 50 in the blink of an eye. Harry being Rose Potter, and good nature characters actually being evil? Very cliché, there are already so many stories like this that it has lost its charm. And Valeria literally telling Rose everything about Hellsing, which by the way is a Top Secret organization, when they met in less than an hour? Not to mention that Valeria was on a DISGUISED mission? The worst undercover agent in the world. Pretty disappointing. Anyway, there are three universes mixed together, I can only see it becoming a complete mess, but I still have hope, I'll keep reading it for now.

I'm going to give my honest review, I hope the author doesn't feel offended or demotivated by it. Firstly, the name of the book is extremely misleading. Author, being completely frank and honest with you, she is not Slaneesh, nor has she been reincarnated as her. She was just reincarnated as a demon-looking mutant, that's all. I was quite disappointed at first, as I thought I would see a Chaos God in Marvel causing confusion and terror, not a girl born as a mutant with the appearance of a demon, it's better to change the name of the book to 'Marvel: I Reincarnated as a Demon' to be honest. That said, my advice is to change the name of the book, because as I said, it is extremely misleading. Secondly, it has two systems, the gacha/template one I understand, but the class one is completely useless so far to be honest. Other than that, it's a good read.

For those of you who came to the reviews to see if it's worth reading, just know that if you are very particular about how the author writes, plot holes and everything else, then this book is not for you. The book is well written, there are almost no grammatical errors, but there are many things that could have been done better. However, as the author mentioned, he is just doing this for fun in his free time. In short, if you are very critical, don't read it, you won't like it. If you read just for fun, like me, then I recommend reading it, it's an interesting story despite everything.

Did she forgot about the ZZZ MC's? Or hasn't been a day yet?