WanderinGlance

Except, that this story is centered around India, sadly, that all, what actually I find unique here. “Wish fulfilment” story, ok… yeah, no! This is but “insulating tape” MC-type, who correct wrongdoing’s an etc… Just dull civilization play with easy mode with rear insert of not so unique enemy’s and friends. Though why would there be even that we have, when MC have “such amazing power”, that “can put Presence (TOAA//The One Above All) to shame”!? Experienced, capable to outsmart MC, enemies with extraordinary motivation? No, never heard of it. Never need it. We don’t even really have here, why the MC needs such a thing as changed destiny of India, when he himself is essentially a product of his timeline with his India and its “imperfect” story? Like, what his purpose to change it, when known hystory, that already happened and still happening in infinite deferent timelines, still exists in your head, in your past world? The hero doesn’t do this for the sake of new relatives and friends; he wanted this before he met them, I remind you. Yeah, it maybe change, and they were added later, but still! For Past, that doesn’t matter for him being dead? For future? Or because author said, that this “wish fulfillment stories”, we should not think and so doesn’t expect this from MC? Is this confession in MC’s stupidity? Well, the logical chain coupled with history actually says this. *cough* I can’t understand, why people so fixed themselves on creation of MC, whose whole being, just centered around being insulating tape for “wrong course of history”. Usually “wish fulfillment”, at least in the past, actually required for MC “to pay the prize”. Cause and effect relationship, motivation and actions. Someone granted my wish? What exactly wish? How? Why I wish that? And what prize world will ask me in return? Get the transmigrator out of here, noth… No, story will become much more logical and so tolerable, because we will really understand, why child of his time will wish for story, described by the author, actually to happen as it is. Plus, a gifted child will be forced to study, how to control his great power. Study, in general. Learn, mature… Enemies will suddenly become more interesting because they will have chances. Yes, destiny of every evil is to be vanquished, but unexpectedly, victories can be made more significant, characters can be given a little more depth… The author could have focused on the real value of these victories for India and its people. Their sorrow and happiness. The real meaning of all this. struggle for them, for them, for whom this history is happening here and now for the first time, and not rewritten for the better. In fact, stories are already a collection of subjective decisions of all their participants: the author could write a good story and call it “wish fulfillment,” but it’s... it’s sad, because it’s empty. I can’t say "and they lived happily ever after", because even MC here is nonexistent point, eye of the storm… like the whole narrative, when all the action remains somewhere outside. Sad. Very said.

It will be funny, if Wayne will become “Sauron’s good side”, his personal personality disorder🤣🤣🤣😂👌

Brave, brave… I mean considering the reverence, with which fans sometimes treat Warhammer and “power scales” in general… I would be wary of just taking something more mundane from there, let alone the whole chaos god. Good luck in your journey)))

Well… first, just as usual, I will write that everything below this is just my subjective opinion, that in a snap of my pride and existence of possibility itself, decided to write this review. Please, don’t think I try to claim, that all of it is some kind of «ultimate truce». You are, of course, free to take note or ignore me, and read this work. Though, thank you very much if you read it and take it to consideration, just like I did with this work) And… it is not… that bad. I read it… till later chapters, I admit. Not to the last, but still… As I said, work actually not bad, plus it is free story, which is actually great plus. Yet… Since I've been given the opportunity to share my opinion… lightness of this work really spoiled it. Author, in my opinion, has taken a bold step and has not mastered the supposedly presented scales of his own world. I won't beat around the bush. Being an outer god here, without capital letters, is nothing more than an excuse to do whatever you want in "material reality". I mean, literally, here whole cause and effect relationship are simply answered by the ”Outer God”... that's all. Here the main character, literally, while becoming one of them, moaned about how “his morality is dying», as if it were a kidney or appendicitis. In my opinion, there is no point in delving further into what was done to the already known representatives of the Howard Heritage. So downgraded, that it is actually sad. Howard Phillips Lovecraft with his Eldricth Pantheon… obliges… at least to me, to consider possibility of real GRAVITY, every letter in capital, of their otherworldly nature, even if Howard himself, if I remember his biography, never wrote anything about certain of his at first just “rumored entities”. You could have twist existence beyond reality, carve your own image of it, or just change… Even if there outer gods can be bested, even if it’s miracle, by gods of martial realm, you still was able discribe real complexity of it. Yet, we’ve got something simple with “one excuse for everything”. I mean siblings of Endless in DC-verse is far more complicated and so more intresting, then this guys here. This work is… it not outright bad, but it is dull, sadly. And vulgar. There no “otherworldly”. At all nothing to think of, nothing to fantasize about, so no sandbox. With “Eldritch”, yeah. No cruelty or Eldritch Cruelty, just brutality, and don’t mistake them, like red and hot. The guys “KINDA can do anything”, but you won’t know why. No characters actually do anything. Kill, destroy, take, mock, seduce, f***… and that all, folks! How terribly strange, of course. Akira wants girls and cause a little bit of simple violence. No rules or power systems, so you can use your mind and imagination to break or hack them in the name of something new, for experiments. No points to prove. А cycle of wish fulfillment for a typical, even for “typical”, MC in a harem fanfic. Where did Akira individuality was lost? Or was it here in the first place? Well… except for for Eldritch Name. There is even sex is “usual”. Of course, it is so hard for being’s of their caliber to bring anything beyond the usual f******. Is there anything else I need to add?

Wow… that hit hard!😳

Isn’t it mark 4?

Why not…

OP.

Because it is quite hard to explain a half-elf, born outside of elf’s domain’s… in this world, at least. Elf’s here either already left middle-earth or remain in their settlements…