I do understand but this is novel means but you don't understand that you're story is perfect kingdom building. after you destroyed what we were waiting and then revenge which last soo long doesn't make senses because you could use titan as a potential war between his kingdom. and to be frank with u its very boring and unfulfilled after revenge. because your whole novel was made for kingdom building. you absolutely trashed your own work and your explanations isn't helping in fact it's stupid

it is because you strat at kingdom building. and you just destroyed you whole work because after he Betrayed everyone it's broken and not appealing and absolutely destroyed whole novel because it became trash without ani reason

why the incest. I just don't get it !

yea totally wrong at end of all series that trian station was Harry's mind space. and Dumbledore left his magic in harry just for that.

I think author should make him steel everything in that dimension they basically sent him to treasure trofe

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and for fanfic (Grampa Univers it's cool

abe the wizard!! it's pure adventure simular to lord of rings but different. and you should get Novelhall app

http://wbnv.in/a/06guxoA

it could be that his divinity has to do with something there 🤔 . you know like. Life/nature/ it's more like that that divinity affecting his psych you know like Greek pantheon

u tried to write without pov but is so hart and it take dabble time. so respect 🙏 👏 🙌

ps you should think of way to punished gods for what they did. and if u make them mortals for centuries in reincarnation process it could work whit time line also I future he will fight gods with avangers.

what if u use this to give him power up I mean his divinity is (life and u could say creation so give him opposite like destruction from dbz). or meaby give him divinity to change humans in to minor gods and power to take divinity from everything god, titans, asgardians,. anyways that's just my thoughts.

that's just wrong

like merlin

what about agyptian beast of chaos I am not sure about a name bat that beast have similarity which mc cause bouth where made of light and darknes

he dropped it. it's make me sad cause 😞 I like it. what a bummer 😕

MC is girl or boy iam confused there ?

Yea we already get that. why original author does not just download app and publish it here 😒 I don't get it!!!!! all of u are soo angry at person who just make this thing more popular 🙄 and it is really good fanfic. 👍 and the guy don't get paid for it does it ?? all this hate here for no reason 😒 ORGINAL AUTHOR SHOULD MAKE HIS ACCOUNT HERE AND PUBLISH IT THAT DOESN'T HAPPEN FOR TWO YEARS.!!!!!!