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I do understand but this is novel means but you don't understand that you're story is perfect kingdom building. after you destroyed what we were waiting and then revenge which last soo long doesn't make senses because you could use titan as a potential war between his kingdom. and to be frank with u its very boring and unfulfilled after revenge. because your whole novel was made for kingdom building. you absolutely trashed your own work and your explanations isn't helping in fact it's stupid
it is because you strat at kingdom building. and you just destroyed you whole work because after he Betrayed everyone it's broken and not appealing and absolutely destroyed whole novel because it became trash without ani reason
why the incest. I just don't get it !
yea totally wrong at end of all series that trian station was Harry's mind space. and Dumbledore left his magic in harry just for that.
I think author should make him steel everything in that dimension they basically sent him to treasure trofe
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and for fanfic (Grampa Univers it's cool
abe the wizard!! it's pure adventure simular to lord of rings but different. and you should get Novelhall app
http://wbnv.in/a/06guxoA
it could be that his divinity has to do with something there 🤔 . you know like. Life/nature/ it's more like that that divinity affecting his psych you know like Greek pantheon