the last one is like austerlitz battle but with bow instead of canon

plagiat...

were*

were*

idk why all the gods where with him yet

red keep*

thanks. you make me return to webnovel

secret*

😴

I asumme most of the readers were not so patient.

the last paragraph is like a chat gpt story

no author reaction. as an author myself I consider you as a coward 😤

just fix your common mistakes pls

we can leave the story but do not lie, saying that there are no fillers[img=faceslap] it's a slow pace story with 50 chapters that can be gathered in 25 and even some of them have no utility. I thought you were different from patreon author but maybe I was wrong

just read the 2 first arcs, and you'll understand ...even the main characters in the first Disney movies encounters more difficulties. Boruto 5 years old, wants to learn new skills he ask naruto friend and it's done. he learns new skills in one try, flirts with every girl whatever their ages and nobody care about that....if you manage to avoid that in your read, it's not bad written.

....everything is fine with the MC. he gets what he wants freely at the age of 7.am I the only one who see a problem in the story?? even Chinese ff with OP characters are more logical.

just read your paragraph.

read each of yours paragraphs so that you're sure thir sounds good and are understandable.and ADD A SPACE WHEN YOU HAVE A PUNCTUATION

mistakes