Zubzas

Prob matching mc’s faith stat

Definitely, if you reread the first paragraph in the chapter it says something along the lines of the metal and glass twisted in his surroundings along with the fact his eyes briefly turned yellow when he was mad

It’s 300 words maximum for that. This is pretty short compared to some of the stuff I’ve read and it has a purpose in setting up the story as a prologue should.

Tbh I think time skips are cool as long as they have meaning / are reflected on later on to show the reader what happened at a critical moment

I’m not sure but I throught that Starfire and black fire got their powers by being experimented on from a species I can’t remember

I like big chapters

Tftc!

It is also bad to have a weak mc in a op setting where he logically should be afraid to die and yet is still weak even with the tools to become stronger

Just an idea for the author for a future story and possibly a storyline, Sean runs into a system or possibly a main god space for reincarnators and they visit dc by accident or are one of his trophies

She was said by the system to be canon fodder, a for a village the best choice is to have a Jinchuriki strong so they can fight other Junchuriki along with the fact that kurama is the strongest tailed beast by far and the training and protection you’d get by the rest of the village I think it would be a great risk because the stronger you are in a world like that the safer you are compared to some canon fodder nobody they send on suicide missions.