De4dlyW0lf

honestly the update schedule will be every 2-3 weeks, but wont start till after march 12, i am going to be at a convention for a week and won't have time to work on it.

Hey! Thank you for reading this story. I do have bad news however, im getting surgery on Saturday, so the story will enter a brief hiatus until I’m not on pain medication. It’s not a life threatening thing, but will make it easier to live day by day. I’ll be back soon! Wish me luck!

I ended up removing the system rather than try to keep track of all the things nescessary for that…my Google sheets was a nightmare…but I digress. In the first chapter, Demaris utilizes martial skills and various magics through his technology.

Thank you for your comment. Demaris isn’t perfect and has a past to overcome. He fought a war for 13 years against the demons, having PTSD from said war. While devils are different from demons, Demaris is struggling to tell the difference between the two when he calls Rias a demon or devil or whatever because they both emanate an ‘evil’ kind of miasma. Hope this helps!

Thank you for reading my story, Consider reading it again one day!

After rereading the story up to this point, I've found quite a number of inconsistencies; personality, and character choices, also kinda forgot about the game system at times, lacking character descriptions... I'm going to step back and do quality control. new chapters will be posted after I am done adjusting the already-completed chapters. I'm not trying to alter my story to the reviews, I want to give the story more life. Also, I honestly struggle to keep track of the game aspect of the story, what would you guys recommend to better keep track of stats? though, given that I already don't like keeping track of the stats I might remove the system altogether, but make his mutant ability straight-up ID create. I have far more free time now that the semester is over and will be focusing on writing. Thank you for reading my story, it means a lot to me!

Thank you for reading the story nonetheless!

That is true, there is always room for improvement in my writing. I do try to consider all the angles in each interaction, perhaps I'm dumbing him down too much, but everyone gets a wake-up call one day and Demaris's wake-up call is inevitable. Thank you for reading my story!

I really like the comments! It is in fact dumb to reveal one’ abilities to strangers. But the sword Saint needs allys and the 12 year old orphan side of Demaris craves connection from others, to feel a sense of belonging. Thank you for reading my story!

I really like the comments! It is in fact dumb to reveal one’ abilities to strangers. But the sword Saint needs allys and the 12 year old orphan side of Demaris craves connection from others, to feel a sense of belonging. Thank you for reading my story!