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bruh just get them together already, shit feels like a slow fire under my ass. Although their interactions tingle my bellybutton, This is getting old fast and a little annoying. For the love of god do it as soon as you can.
This fanfic is highly rated mainly due to their being very few super gene fanfics out there but The writing quality is quite poor, the characters are very hollow and feel very artificial. The interactions between characters is honestly very bland and totally unrealistic and fake feeling. Most of the time the plot is all over the place and sometimes I have quite a hard time following what's even going on. Definitely a good attempt at a super gene fic but but the execution was subpar at best. Author should focus on improving writing quality and character interactions and making the characters actually feel alive rather than feeling like chat gpt.
Honestly there aren't many hajime no ippo fanfics anywhere and this is hand's down one of the best, if not the best hajime no ippo fic. I don't know why people are hating on this fic, like why does the fic's name or the MC's name even matter. What matter's is how good the story is and this story is a very well blend of characters, the world, writing quality. The updates are consistent, the world is well fleshed out and the character are true to the source materials. Overall a five out of five fic.
Wish you the best my man, I hope you and your family can pull through this disaster safely and as stronger individuals.
Shameless plagiarizer, Go read the original. this fic is a constant target for "R" word tards, who think everyone but them are idiots and can't figure anything out on their own.
I've got the perfect title for this novel Study Between The Relationship of Stockholm Syndrome And Impregnation. That basically sums up this novel.
The concept was good, the writing quality was also good, the character's were relatively fleshed out but unfortunately the plot spiraled out of control and became very unrefined. You have almost everything down just work on your world building and plot and you'll be fine and dandy. I would suggest rewriting this book.
Alot of mistakes were made, first of all the writing quality is very subpar as in the constant switching of perspective, lack of descriptive but attention grabbing sentences/paragraphs. The character design is very flawed, The MC's development is hazy and shaky at best and his charactert traits don't really pop. The rest of the character's are npcs at best. The murder of his family wasn't really impactful as we, the readers lacked the emotional connection with them. If you had 1 or 2 chapter's to build a connection with the family their deaths would draw us in instead of us being like whatever. The world background is basically nonexistent and the element's that made Harry Potter what it is, is stitched together with not a thread but by a rope. The pacing is inconsistent and goes as fast and as slow as it wants which makes the story very annoying and frankly very boring to read. The concept was good but the execution killed it with it feeling like something someone would come up with while high of their minds.
I initially went into the novel with very low expectations and just wanted to read something to pass the time but this book is one the best books I've read in the recent times filled with brainrot harem bs. The story feels alive and can actually go nect to neck with paid books. Keep up the awesome work and hope you don't make this book paid.
Shallow Characters, Writing is an absolute crapstorm, can't even understand what's being said and what's even going on. All in all feels like chewing on rubber thinking it's A5 wagyu.