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I have read so many online stories and the intro chapter usually makes me drop it from lack of grammar/spelling ALONE, no matter how good the plot is. What good is the plot if the story's unreadable? Your grammar and spelling are IMMACULATE. Please keep up the good work!

OK. Could you give me more info on how to improve it? :)

I always want him to kill Nero, and its so weird because I wrote him, lol. They're like archenemies at this point, and I like to believe that w/o Nero around Forthright would be super bored.

First of all. You read so fast. Like, your last comment was on Chapter 2, oh my god, LOL. Also, this, in my opinion isn't the goriest death. I think there was a man that was deboned like a chicken in one scene. My favorite death happens midway through this book.

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. I'm currently designing the characters for the manga that I will draw soon and I'm also coding the website for it right now! I hope you'll read it once I start posting pages!!! :)

Thanks for reading and for the power stone! I hope you like this silly story as much as I do :)

Shoutout to MansiManu11518 who was nice enough to give me so many power stones <3

Thanks for taking the time to read this. Since its not a romance I didn't think anyone on this site would even read it, so it makes me very happy that you did. It is sometimes hard to write and now I'm currently finishing the the third book, and boy its tough, but its a lot of fun. I'd love to know if there is anything else I could improve on. Let me know. :)

Dont worry. They dont...you know...

It's discussed more throughout the book Revenge, and the book that comes after it. Classism and racism don't seem to be a thing in the beginning because Ace and his friends all hang out around only other astrals, who are all rich and spoiled. Once they leave their comfort zone though, even the MC is a little racist