This is a Good System Novel, where system's Mysterious Origin is touched upon. The Plot is full of mystery , for the beginning, which I like a lot. Grammar and writing Quality is excellent , although not perfect. Was hesitant of System story , but has me hooked. 7.7/10

This is an awesome start filled with intrigue. Fellow Daoist, wish you Luck

Working on giving my Best in that Department but my Brain often gets Fatigued from thinking this Deep Story.

Excellent Story with Good Long term Prospects. What else can one ask for ? Good Material, Mysterious Worldbuilding, Amazing Story tapestry.

Martial Memes Sect Pays Tribute to Fellow Daoist of Writing

Everybody Watch Movie "Kantara", really Crazy Good Movie from South India. Or at least see the "Wohoooo Kantara Clip" on youtube or something.

This is my New Account from which I will be writing the Revamped Version of this Novel.

Well, the Updates here will be Paused as I have no way to login with an account that was linked with facebook. the novel is pretty good, but it will take 20CHps for it to properly delve deep into cultivation power systems and get the Action going on.