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Good day, I noticed some negative comments on the grammar quality on your novel and while I haven't read it myself if you're looking for an editor I'd be glad to offer my services, we can have a trail run where you veto the quality of my work before we discuss any concrete plans

I honestly don't think Erin is all that necessary, and these people are seriously underestimating quinn, like even at 16 he was a powerhouse capable of recking multiple new gen dalai and after a 1000 years he's amongst the strongest celestial out there, celestial's that have been around for hundreds of thousands of years, the guys potential seems to actually be unlimited which makes sense considering he's desended from Ray who could literally drains thousands of people of their power by simply being in the same room as them, it seems to me like quinn doesn't have a limit on the amount of energy he can hold whether it be ki, blood energy celestial energy or mc cells the last of which we actually know that each individual should have a limit for, I wouldn't be surprised this in 10 years he could fold immorti and the ancient ones together. side note it seems quinn will get a new power up in the form of universal energy, can't wait

nah its more likely that the beast had reached the level of a god slayer and since godslayer powers can't be destroyed only transfered from one person to another the beasts powers will just be tranfered to someone else

has anyone here read my dragon system, if so they should remember Morfan graylash the ansestor of the graylash family who stayed behind in the world in-between earth and the after life to keep the dragons from invading, what if its him

this is disappointing, Andy sangunies, you'd think quinn would be able to make a decent guess when he heard that name

has anyone here read noblesse, this scene was exactly how it looks when the main character Razaiel uses his full power

imagine if your ancestor was a bad influence 9n you🤣

I'll explain more in the later chapters