What happened to this forced plot?. At first the author was quite good, but after a while I started to feel stupid by reading these forced plot holes.

In every fic I read, Danzo is always evil😅. Can someone give me a little feel for this character? I started to hate him

The author says it's not cliche but he killed MC's family😂. Although I agree that MC has no restraints (MC's Family) but this seems like a common thing to have them all die and it's quite common... well... cliche

Hahahaha... Sorry I made a typo because the keyboard automatically filled it in

3 Anbu is MC's family? Well... looks like we're going into a traitorous plot? or does the author have other thoughts? It was stupid enough to kill Hanzo in Konoha, however the third Hokage now sided with Hanzo without thinking twice.

Heh...they're whining too far, this is your fanfic and make it what you like. It's true that we can judge, but why listen to whining that ruins your work? this is great and please continue.

Thanks bro.

I really like it, the author thought carefully about the ending of each world well.

Brooo... this satisfies me. I mean, every time I read cultivation novels. MC who is already very strong somehow postpones his old problems until the next 20-50 chapters, honestly it's annoying

I'm on chapter 19. OK... so far I don't find any fanfic elements, but the story is really good. The cover is not wrong in saying this is a masterpiece that I have not found on MTL or Falo because I am more often on WN to read. Please keep up the translation, maybe someone knows the original link?

Amazing, very beautiful first arc, the writing is very easy to read. I love this, but why is this book in fanfic?

I'm on chapter 31. I rarely get emotional when reading fanfic, you know... happy, sad, and funny. Experiencing the first arc in this fanfic made me feel various emotions... until the end which was very... very... painful for my little heart. Like... why? why does the writing make... *ugh* there are no spoilers. Entering the main story, we are presented with the MC's world which is freer with its sadness. Trying to get out of the abyss of despair while looking for a way to bring him back. And I'm saving chapters, please no spoilers.

I hate the pain in my heart, why does the author do this?. Why? Why? Why!!!?? Reply me

What's wrong with them? Giving a small rating to a book like this? WTF??? I'm on CH 139. So far the MC looks very OP because of the Fujitora Template from One Piece, he doesn't just sleep and eat to get these powers. The training is clear, the dedication to revenge is also the MC's big ambition to move forward to 100% mastery of the template. This story is also quite unique because MC is Blind, has Haki, a new Sage Mode and does not have the smell of naivety known as MC Beta. Hah... this is really good. Thank You.

Chapter 37. Sorry I can't continue, the story is starting to get boring because the plot is starting to repeat itself. MC Building a Village > Ninja Clan Rescue > Making a Movie > Back to Building a Village and so on. There are no fights involving the MC. I think this is suitable for those of you who want to see the MC's daily life building a village, if you don't get bored with the same plot. Just that.

This decision is quite disappointing, the author tried to tell the story as it was originally written. There are no changes whatsoever, I think the MC will become Hokage and start a new plot. But... hah.... so disappointed.

I really like your work, thank you friend

Is this another Itachi LoL

Haven't read it for a long time, the quality of the author is getting better over time. Well... this is worth supporting.

OK, this is very interesting because most fics cast almost all the same women.