Just a new author, doing it for fun, always looking for what I can improve on. We'll see where this journey takes me.
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I think so too, but I'm fairly new to writing, and at the moment of writing this part, and how he addressed him seemed correct. Writing conversations is not my strong point.
Thanks, I haven't noticed.
I have been why a lot to do this week I will publish as soon as I can.
Thanks for the feedback, I see where you are coming from. I just did this with the purpose of setting up some things I had planned for how I want the story to develop in the future. And what I thought of why he turns them so easily is because what he wants is not only him and does around him being Lycans, but to revive the Lycan as the stories told in his old life. So in the future, he will turn other families than MC deemed worthy.
I don't know yet how big I want them to normally be, but they will still grow quite a bit. Every Lycan that is recently turned will have a period of time where his true self will grow.
I saw it as they spend more time trying to not make a lot of noise and get caught, maybe I should have explained it a bit better.
I have not decided what the Starks will do exactly. And about the Dothraki, I already planned on something like that.
That's what I am thinking of doing, but as I don't know have a lot of experience in writing I don't know how I will end up developing it.
Yes, but he will before it all starts he will already have some more experience and strength.
I don't plan on going in that direction, but thanks for the observation.