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Still working on my novel.
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The way the author conducts this story is masterful, and it deserves recognition based on this fact. Although there are some instances where the grammar and punctuation are a bit iffy, the product is definitely better than most on this platform. From their use of quotes to further mystique to their building of the story’s background and characters, this author displays their writing experience through carefully placed and crafted events that make for a story that I see gaining a huge following in the future. As the novel is still in its early stages, one can follow the journey alongside the author and are sure to be in for a ride.
Nesquik🤨
Smooth criminal
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Honestly, I haven’t been this hooked on a first chapter before. I’ve seen others come close, but none compared to how immersed into the story I became just from the first chapter. Throughout my reading, I was kept entertained, complementing the quality of the first chapter, and although I don’t typically read harem or romance novels, I came to appreciate the worldbuilding and story of this one. Keep up the good work.
This was an awesome start
Lili’s a funny character. I like how she’s very unique compared to Xeik and Blossom.
Dang. This is going quickly.
Practicing while on fire?!
Truth
These two have a heart-warming relationship.
I’m curious as to the world they live in